A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the waiter and waitresses job vacancy printed in the local newspaper

this

morning. As you know, I am interested in applying for the said job. I am currently working as a server in Manam, a fine dining restaurant located in Uptown Mall, Taguig City. I believe I am credible for the said job because of my Bachelor's degree in Hospitality Management and my work experience as a server in Wolfgang Restaurant in Conrad Hotel, Pasay City as my on-the-job training during college. I have attached my resume and other necessary documents for my application, If you have any questions you may contact me through my cellphone number it's 09175115754 or through my email at [email protected]. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Nerissa De Peralta

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

137 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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