What is your favorite activity? Why do you like this activity? The last time that you did this activity?

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In the
last
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year, my favourite activity was playing a famous mobile
game
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called
Pubg
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. I used to play
this
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game
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every day for four years without being interrupted. I made friends by it from all around the Middle East. we used to talk, made short videos, play and do activities with a group of people we were not known them.
Pubg
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it's a common
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that anyone can involved in easily,
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it's not the only
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but it is the most popular war
game
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in the App store and google store.
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, I was pleased to watch the challenges matches and championships through YouTube and Facebook Live. It was one of my hobbies that I admired, it made me feel enthusiastic and higher my adrenaline. It was incredible and takes all your attention to get the win, I stopped playing
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since I changed my phone, and
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my goals changed actually. I stark to make my whole focus into something that could be useful for me in future. So I am about a year didn’t play
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, and
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is was my favourite activity.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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