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The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The images visualize the upcoming construction of an industrial zone which will be changed into a housing space. At a glance, there are a lot of additional roads and facilities in the city because of the shift of function that it conducts. For the road plan, there are additional branches in the roundabout and line which increase the accessibility of land and eventually make the field constructible.
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, there is a new bridge
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 crossing the river to the farmland.
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, the farmland area can be reached in future development. Meanwhile, in the building layout, there are additional facilities which are located across the town. Shops and medical centres are situated between city roundabouts
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 playgrounds and schools are constructed in the right area of the city.
This
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 condition is an enormous development if it is compared with the current industrial zone because there are no facilities located.
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 with that, the zone composition is
also
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 pretty much changed. The new space is buildable in the upcoming concept
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 the road availability to reach those locations.
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