The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture describes the process
for
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recycling
plastic
bottles. It starts with deposing a
plastic
bottle into a correct recycling bin and after 9 steps it ends with
a
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production of new products created from the already used
plastic
. After the
plastic
is thrown into a bin for
plastic
materials, it is picked up by a specifically modified
vehicule
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vehicle
and transported to a recycling
center
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for sorting.
This
is done manually by picking the valid
plastic
bottles that can be used for recycling and to produce new products. In the fourth step,
plastic
bottles are compressed into blocs, which are
then
crushed using two wheels. The crushed plastics are washed and in the sixth step put into a specific machine that produces
plastic
pellets. By applying heat to the
plastic
pellets they are transformed into
a
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raw material and in the
last
step new products are manufactured from the raw material.
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