The increase in food production is mostly due to fertilizers and better machinery .Yet, some think that it harms human health and communities.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The improvement in the

food

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industry and

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is mostly

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fertilizers

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and better

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. There is a belief that

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an involvement in the

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business

threatening

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human

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and

societies

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. In my honest opinion, I believe developing

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production

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generally improves human

health

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the adverse effects of

fertilizers

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and

machinery

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. Despite old-style organic farms providing great dairy, vegetables and fruits; industrial

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with

fertilizers

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and

machinery

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, provide huge amounts of products for cheaper prices.

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amount of

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will always

decreases

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market prices and increases

agricultural

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the agricultural

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economy.

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development in

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sector impacts

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human

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and communities. There are thousands of people around the world affected by malnutrition

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lack

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a lack

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of adequate nutrition.

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unbalanced or inadequate diet can result in illnesses, especially in juveniles,

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as mental retardation, growth abnormalities and kwashiorkor diseases;

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production

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quality should be overweight to quantity.

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development in other sectors like transportation, manufacturing, marketplaces, and agriculture improve the life standard of citizens.

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of minor harms of

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and

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, increased

production

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rate, development in other sectors and solution for malnourishment are important features of industrial

food

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production

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and I disagree with the given idea.

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, some think that it harms human

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and communities but most of them couldn't remember the market prices of foods, malnutrition reality and growth in different sectors indirectly.