The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words

The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

150 words
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The maps illustrate the projected changes in an industrial
area
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in the town of Norbiton.
Firstly
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, it can be noted how the roundabout at the centre of the
area
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is planned to have two more exits, one pointing to the north and the other one to the north-west,
while
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in the southern one, which connects the
road
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to the town to
this
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area
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, a new roundabout will be constructed on
place
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the place
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of the
acutal
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actual
crossing.
Furthermore
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, in the
vicinty
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vicinity
of the
roundabout
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there will be some shops
on
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in
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the
south-west
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southwest
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and a medical centre
on
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in
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the
south-east
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southeast
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.
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to that, the new exit on the north-east will conduce to some residences.
On the other hand
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, in the east
area
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, where now there are some factories, some significant changes are planned.
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,
at the end
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of the
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road
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there will be a school,
whereas
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along the
road
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there will be houses
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and a playground. In the northern part of the
area
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, where now there are only farmlands, a new
road
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and bridge over the river will
be build
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, creating another residential zone.
For
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this
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reason, farmland
area
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will be reduced to only the
north-east
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northeast
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. In conclusion, it can be stated how major changes are planned. In fact, the
area
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will have some great developments, probably to give to the new inhabitants some necessary services and
accomodations
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accommodations
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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