The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words
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The maps illustrate the projected changes in an industrial
area
in the town of Norbiton.
Firstly
, it can be noted how the roundabout at the centre of the area
is planned to have two more exits, one pointing to the north and the other one to the north-west, while
in the southern one, which connects the road
to the town to this
area
, a new roundabout will be constructed on place
of the Add an article
the place
acutal
crossing. Correct your spelling
actual
Furthermore
, in the vicinty
of the Correct your spelling
vicinity
roundabout
there will be some shops Add a comma
,roundabout
on
the Change preposition
in
south-west
and a medical centre Correct your spelling
southwest
on
the Change preposition
in
south-east
. Correct your spelling
southeast
In addition
to that, the new exit on the north-east will conduce to some residences.
On the other hand
, in the east area
, where now there are some factories, some significant changes are planned. For instance
, at the end
of the road
there will be a school, Add a comma
,road
whereas
along the road
there will be houses,
and a playground. In the northern part of the Remove the comma
apply
area
, where now there are only farmlands, a new road
and bridge over the river will be build
, creating another residential zone. Change the verb form
be built
For
this
reason, farmland area
will be reduced to only the north-east
.
In conclusion, it can be stated how major changes are planned. In fact, the Correct your spelling
northeast
area
will have some great developments, probably to give to the new inhabitants some necessary services and accomodations
.Correct your spelling
accommodations
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