You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter Say how you came to know about him/her Explain why you want to learn Ask what help they can offer

Dear sir or madam I am
Correct your spelling
writing
wrting
Correct your spelling
writing
a letter to you to bestow
me
Correct pronoun usage
my
show examples
want to learn a new
language
from you As is
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
known that i am from
navai city
Correct your spelling
Navai City
show examples
.
Last
year
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
moved to
bukhara
Change the capitalization
Bukhara
show examples
which
Correct word choice
where
show examples
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
start
Wrong verb form
started
show examples
preparing for university.
Therefore
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
need
new
Add an article
a new
show examples
language
for my job. The most
indespansable
Correct your spelling
indispensable
and outstanding facet which
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
ought to be inferred is that
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
made from my mym to search best
english
Change the capitalization
English
show examples
teacher.
Meanwhile
Add a comma
Meanwhile,
show examples
friend give me your address. As is it clear that
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
most
Correct your spelling
must
show examples
enter to university.
Therefore
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
want to learn
Correct article usage
the english
show examples
english
Change the capitalization
English
show examples
language
.
On the other
hand
Add a comma
hand,
show examples
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
am
interesting
Replace the word
interested
show examples
to
Change preposition
in
show examples
languages.especially,
english
Change the capitalization
English
show examples
,
japanse
Correct your spelling
Japanese
,
french
Capitalize word
French
show examples
and others.
According to
my
dad
Change noun form
dad's
show examples
sentense
Correct your spelling
sentence
english
Change the capitalization
English
show examples
best
language
. I want to get
IELTS
Correct article usage
an IELTS
show examples
band score
8
Change preposition
of 8
show examples
.
Then
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
would help you tutor. Because
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
am keen on
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
teaching.
Yourth
Correct your spelling
Yours
faithfully Jordy
jekson
Correct your spelling
Jackson
Alisher
Submitted by nazirovmuhammad71 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task response
The response does not fully address the task. Provide more specific and relevant content.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter follows a clear structure with an opening greeting, body paragraphs, and a closing statement.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and ensure that words are used accurately and appropriately.
grammatical range
Review grammar usage and apply varied sentence structures to demonstrate a strong command of the language.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Get your IELTS Essential Vocabulary List —
What to do next:
Look at other essays: