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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter follows a clear structure with an opening greeting, body paragraphs, and a closing statement.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and ensure that words are used accurately and appropriately.
grammatical range
Review grammar usage and apply varied sentence structures to demonstrate a strong command of the language.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite