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You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to

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Dera Sir, I hope you find my letter in good health and in the best of spirits. I'
m
 writing
this
 letter to make a request to change my present
course
. Presently, I'
m
 a first-semester student studying the Information System
Business
 Analysis
course
 at your college. My academic background belongs to Bachelor's in Computer Applications, and I wanted to do higher studies in the same field, but my father has a family-owned
business
, so
along with
 computers, I was looking for some
business
 program, so that, I can help my father in their
business
 in a more advanced way,
that is
 the reason, I took that
course
. But as of now,
while
 I'
m
 preparing for my
course
, I'
m
 not able to understand the concepts of
Business
 as I do not have basic knowledge of
Business
 theories and other related aspects. I felt
Business
 studies are not meant for me, I'
m
 doing the computer part under the same
course
 very well. So, I would like to completely shift to a study which deals only with information systems. So, kindly shift me from my current academic
course
 to a Computer Engineering
course
. I hope you understand my concern and quickly respond to my request so that I will start my studies in that
course
 at the earliest. Yours Sincerely, Lisha Lokai.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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