You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to

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Dera Sir, I hope you find my letter in good health and in the best of spirits. I'

writing

this

letter to make a request to change my present

course

. Presently, I'

a first-semester student studying the Information System

Business

Analysis

course

at your college. My academic background belongs to Bachelor's in Computer Applications, and I wanted to do higher studies in the same field, but my father has a family-owned

business

, so

along with

computers, I was looking for some

business

program, so that, I can help my father in their

business

in a more advanced way,

that is

the reason, I took that

course

. But as of now,

while

preparing for my

course

, I'

not able to understand the concepts of

Business

as I do not have basic knowledge of

Business

theories and other related aspects. I felt

Business

studies are not meant for me, I'

doing the computer part under the same

course

very well. So, I would like to completely shift to a study which deals only with information systems. So, kindly shift me from my current academic

course

to a Computer Engineering

course

. I hope you understand my concern and quickly respond to my request so that I will start my studies in that

course

at the earliest. Yours Sincerely, Lisha Lokai.

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3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

218 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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