The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words

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The map illustrates the process of converting the Norbiton industrial

area

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into a new Looking from an

overall

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point of view it is readily apparent that factories are going to be replaced with housing and infrastructures for inhabitants. currently,

this

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space is allocated to an industrial zone,

thus

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,there are no living spaces at the moment.

This

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zone is separated from farmland by the river in the north which runs parallel to the main

road

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,which is on the south border of the

area

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road

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extending from the southern border of the main

road

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towards the centre makes a roundabout and

then

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stretches towards the east.The industrial buildings are situated along the sideway and around the roundabout. In the future, all factories will be demolished and there will be an extension of the

road

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towards the north where it is going to bridge the river and connect farmland to the city .In the farmland blind-ended short-distance track will be formed parallel to the river where a housing scheme will be built

along with

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that track.Apart from that living

area

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, there will be living areas along the

road

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extension towards the east and to the northwest.There will be a newly built roundabout between the main

road

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and the old roundabout.Between

this

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area

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medical centres and shops will be established on the right and left respectively.The school will be

at the end

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of the western extension of the

road

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while

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a new playground will be added in the centre of that extended

road

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

248 words

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