The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words

The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

150 words
The map illustrates the process of converting the Norbiton industrial
area
into a new Looking from an
overall
point of view it is readily apparent that factories are going to be replaced with housing and infrastructures for inhabitants. currently,
this
space is allocated to an industrial zone,
thus
,there are no living spaces at the moment.
This
zone is separated from farmland by the river in the north which runs parallel to the main
road
,which is on the south border of the
area
.A
road
extending from the southern border of the main
road
towards the centre makes a roundabout and
then
stretches towards the east.The industrial buildings are situated along the sideway and around the roundabout. In the future, all factories will be demolished and there will be an extension of the
road
towards the north where it is going to bridge the river and connect farmland to the city .In the farmland blind-ended short-distance track will be formed parallel to the river where a housing scheme will be built
along with
that track.Apart from that living
area
, there will be living areas along the
road
extension towards the east and to the northwest.There will be a newly built roundabout between the main
road
and the old roundabout.Between
this
,
area
medical centres and shops will be established on the right and left respectively.The school will be
at the end
of the western extension of the
road
while
a new playground will be added in the centre of that extended
road
.
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