the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010
The provided map illustrates the differences in
road
access to Use synonyms
a
Correct article usage
apply
city
hospitals in 2007 and 2010. It can be seen that the most distinctive feature of the Use synonyms
two
kinds of maps was the roundabout establishment, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
city
hospital location was still the same.
From the map, the position of the ring Use synonyms
road
, Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
road
, and hospital Use synonyms
road
was in the same place and there was no improvement with regard to the size. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, in terms of car park location, there was a change in 2010 where the car park of staff and public were separated into Linking Words
two
sites. The first site was located on the right side of the Use synonyms
city
hospital, Use synonyms
while
the staff car park was in the same location as in 2007. Linking Words
In addition
, the bus stop in 2010 had relocated to the left side of the hospital Linking Words
road
with a large space and used the united concept which was totally different from the previous site where in 2007 it contained six spots dedicated to the bus stops. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there was a unique feature of the bus station which has Linking Words
two
options Use synonyms
roads
that can be accessed through the Change preposition
for roads
two
roundabouts.Use synonyms
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