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Some people think that a person should change a career at least once, while others think that it is better to stay in one job for a lifetime. What is your opinion?

#people #person #change #career #job #lifetime
it is true that
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 the career path is full of changeable options. Many consider that every member of the
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 one day is obliged to make a choice
changing
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 their
job
.
However
, some people advocate that
workers
 have to be loyal
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their current
job
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long term
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 period,
however
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 I partly agree with
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 statement. In
this
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job
opportunity
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 based on my point of view and support
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 examples as well. On one hand, in
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contemporary capitalism, every person
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 to attain
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 living
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standard
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 jobs. So, after graduating from university, most students would apply to different companies related to their own majors,
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 a result of
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successful
 interviews they can have a chance
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 in that
company
 as a worker. But for a
while
, if ones would lose their
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to
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 the
job
, they
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 to alter it. Actually, certain reasons are not ignored in
this
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For example
, the female
workers
 experienced some
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unappropriate
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, they would tend to quit work. So, it is mainly about psychological factors. On the flip side, in some
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 there are
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numerous
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companies which are interested in
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loyal
workers
. Because if the
workers
choosed
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choose
staying
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 in their previous
company
during
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the
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long periods, with regard to they would be estimated they have a valuable personality. In conclusion, both sides
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 on the
workers
' living
standart
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standards
 and aspirations,
however
 from my point of view, if the worker could acquire enough knowledge and experience in the small
company
, in order to they would apply to
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 paramount
company
that is
 economically and worker based policy is better than the small
company
.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • career mobility
  • adaptability
  • professional growth
  • career trajectory
  • monotony
  • upskill
  • transferable skills
  • job security
  • seniority
  • professional network
  • stagnation
  • job burnout
  • obsolescence
  • promotion
  • pension
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