The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1972 and 2000 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the gross weight of goods being carried by different transport mediums over a 28-year period from 1972 to 2000 in the UK.
In general, it is evident that during the complete period under observation,
road
was the most used means of transportation, Add an article
the road
whereas
pipeline was the least used.
Looking Linking Words
firstly
at road and Linking Words
pipline
, Correct your spelling
pipeline
while
in 1972 the former carried around 72 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
of items, Use synonyms
initially
fluctuating and Linking Words
then
eventually rising to just under 100 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
by the year 2000, the latter increased from approximately 5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
to 20 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
over the first two decades and remained the same till the end of the period.
Turning to transportation via rail and water, Use synonyms
although
both of these modes started from roughly 40 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
, post-1976 the graphs for these diverged as Use synonyms
this
figure significantly grew for waterways to about 60 Linking Words
million
, Use synonyms
whereas
rail saw a decline of 10 Linking Words
million
. Over the next few years, transportation via water was almost stable ending at 62 Use synonyms
million
, meanwhile, rail ended back at 40 Use synonyms
million
after slight variations.Use synonyms
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