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In recent years, the number of crimes committed by teenagers in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

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In
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 contemporary world, the ratio of youngsters committing numerous
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 in metropolitan cities is gradually inclining.
According to
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 me, there are so many factors that could be the reason behind
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 crime. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will be discussing some of the main reasons that cause
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 increment and
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, some possible solutions to sort those issues will be discussed.
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, one of the main reason is the hectic schedule of
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 which create a barrier in their relationships and
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, leads to a huge impact on
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's mental stability when they have to stay alone at home. Adding to it, awareness is missing about the discussing consequences of committing different
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 in today's parent-child conversations as a moral lesson learnt from
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 about their self-experience in real life
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 of learning through books would definitely have more impact on their upbringing. In a recent survey of Maharashtra, cities with both
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 working have 10% more crime rates as compared to the cities where at least one parent is available to their
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 whenever in need.
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, these could be some of the possible solutions to these mentioned reasons. Governments need to arrange awareness about the drawbacks of
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 through seminars conducted in schools, and universities on the regular basis.
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,
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 have to start spending some quality time from their busy schedule with their
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 because their
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 are their most important responsibility as they are the future of
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 world.
Parents
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 should raise their young
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 with etiquette so that they will become good, responsible and independent.
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, some schools in Gujarat have started conducting seminars regarding different life-changing topics which are considered important to be taught to youngsters by encouraging
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 as well their participation. To summarize, as discussed above, there are so many causes why these
crimes
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 are increasing at a fast pace today. But we still got time to make
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 world a friendly and crime-free place by taking some measures to combat these which could be done more easily if governments should start taking some action about it.

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