Some people say that to solve today global problem every nation should have a good relationship with other nation to what extent do you agree with statement

To solve the global problem nowadays, every
country
should keep good
relationshop
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relationship
with each other that the opinions of many people's mind. I believe
that is
truth
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for every
nation
to have good partnerships with
others
and I will express my ideas
to
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the following essay. In my opinion of view, it is important to have
good
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a good
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connection
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connections
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between countries, which helps the nations can be
ealier
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easier
to deal with problems together
such
as
pulltion
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pollution
pulling
, politics,
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and economic
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economic
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economics
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.
In other words
, nowadays every
nation
suffers from the COVID
pedamic
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pandemic
, every
country
should be willing to share the information with
others
to face the issues and discuss
about
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how to cure
this
disease. It is better to keep
the
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responsibility of each
country
to consider
about
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the health of their residents before making
the
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decisions. On one hand, it is
ealier
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easier
for every government to decide and make
correct
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decision if the
informaiton
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information
is correct and it helps the leaders make the next steps to help the residents move on the
difficulity
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difficulty
.
For instance
, there was a big earthquake in Turkey
few
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a few
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days ago, there were many nations tried to help and sent their groups to Turkey to search
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survivers
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survivors
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. It is a good example that
the
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nations should keep good relationships with
others
because
for
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most of the issues
happened
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around the world will
also
have
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an affect
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affect
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from
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the
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certain ways
such
as
economy
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the economy
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or transportation. Even though it only happens in a
country
, it will become a global issue. Every
nation
has
the
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global commitment
with
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to
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others
to keep the
banlance
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balance
of the economy between countries
that
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so that
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everyone can live
in
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a peaceful life. In conclusion,
everyday
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there will have a new problem in a
country
, and the
nation
should deal with the trouble correctly and
freqency
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frequency
to make the world continue staying
in
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peaceful;
however
, every
nation
should be responsibilities for sharing
the
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information and
keep
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the border commitments for having
friendly
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a friendly
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relationship with
others
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaborate
  • foster
  • tackle
  • sharing of resources
  • diplomatic negotiations
  • peace-building
  • conflicts
  • escalation
  • geopolitical
  • national sovereignty
  • non-state actors
  • augment
  • innovative solutions
  • specialized expertise
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