Some people think a job not only provides income but also social life. Others think it is better to develop social life with people you do not work with. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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the outstanding development of society, the

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between

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is more complicated than in the past. Some

people

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argue that working not only helps earn money but

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extends the

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circle

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some believe that developing

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a social

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life with non-colleagues is better. In

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essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and state my personal thinking.

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with, it is obviously advantageous to get along well with co-workers,

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, under the circumstances of having a hard-working time, the co-workers are great

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willing to give a hand. They are the nearest

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which tasks are stuck and may be possible to support.

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, developing social relationships with them may create a great understanding between each other,

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as working styles, mindset and personal characteristics, which is helpful and beneficial ,particularly in group work or tasks requiring high engagement. The more cohesion

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in the workplace, the greater performance is.

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, Human Resource practitioners in organisations clearly understand the benefits of

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strong

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in the workplace they organise lots of in-door and out-door activities to engage employees. Those activities not only create a great and relaxing time for employees but

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help employees expand their circle of relationships.

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, improving social life with partners in the company is

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a great choice with having income and

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having friends.

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, there is no denying that it is

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good when

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a social life with non-colleagues.

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, there is no conflict in benefits relating to work in the

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. When it comes to benefits,

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can become more selfish,

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the

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is

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worse day by day, and it

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later.

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tend to express themselves clearly with no fear of being taken advantage of, which is

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a healthy

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.

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, some

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match in working styles but have conflicts of interest that

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negatively to their department, particularly in group performance.

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this

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reason, it is better to develop a social circle with

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not working.

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, I support the fact that becoming an employee not only has income but

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social relationships because of these prominent advantages.