The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates how many foreign people visited Europe in a specific area (coast, mountain, and lake) from 1987 to 2007.
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, it can be seen that all the areas in years increase in a specific moment, the coast is by far the zone with the most constant rise. A more detailed look at the graph reveals that the three areas started all with different numbers the lowest were lakes,
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, until 2002 it was a steady increase and overseas visitors were almost 80 thousand. Unfortunately,
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number drops dramatically in the following years. The coast arrived at the top in 2007 when visitors were the same as those of the lakes in 2002.
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, in 1992
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area has suffered a collapse. The line that indicates the mountains’ visitors is the flattest, so tourism in
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area does not increase too much. The rise indicated reached only 40 thousand people approximately.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: The word "indicates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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