The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The chart compares the Australian males' and females' physical
activity
on a regular basis
according to
six
age
categories in the year 2010.
Overall
,
women
older than 25 tended to be more physically active rather than
men
of the same
age
,
while
the opposite is true for
men
and
women
under 24. It is safe to say that both
men
's and
women
's percentages showed fluctuations during the ages.
Men
's physical
activity
declined significantly at the
age
of 15-24 to 35-44 (from 52.8% to 39.5%) and after 44 there was a declining trend in the amount of
men
's exercise ( reduced by about 7%).
On the other hand
, the percentage of Australian
women
doing regular physical
activity
increased at the
age
of 44, almost did not differ until the
age
of 64 and
then
reduced. The amount of physical
activity
in
women
aged between 45 to 54, which is the highest, accounted for 53.3% and the lowest, which was contributed to
women
over 65, accounted for 47.1%,
whereas
the highest percentage of physical
activity
in
men
stood at 52.8% for whom at
age
of 15-24 and the lowest was 39.5% for
men
aged between 35 to 44.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activity, age, women, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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