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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The trend of digitalization is
also
 apparent in the way we read. It is expected that in the future news or literature will be
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 online without any fees. In
this
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while
 it might be the case that no one will read physical newspapers or books, it will still be necessary to pay for
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. Having all readings on an electronic device is much more
convinient
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convenient
 than on
a
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paper. The fact that in a smartphone or an e-book
reader
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 it is possible to fit thousands of literature pieces or media articles gives great comfort.
For example
, the struggle
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 book to bring with
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 holidays
disappeares
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disappeared
disappears
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 into a pocket.
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Furthermore
, it is possible to read a wider range of various media and authors, given that everything is just at the touch of a button and crucially the ability to select just a specific article one’s
intereted
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interested
 in.
While
 in
case
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 of printed media, to read just one article it is necessary to buy the whole piece.
Although
newspaper
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newspapers
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 can generate substantial revenues from
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an advertisement
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advertisement
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 on their websites, it is usually not enough to cover all expenses. Some newspapers are
then
 owned by wealthy people that can influence
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journalism, resulting in
a biased articles
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. For
independent
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newspaper
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newspapers
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 to survive they either need to target readers by writing catchy titles and covering topics that appeal to
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 public as a number of clicks generate profits or create a paywall for their articles in order to fund well-researched reports. In
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 of books, where there is less space for commercials, it is paramount to charge for them even online,
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 authors would not have enough finances to write and publish their work. In conclusion, I am strongly convinced that people will use smart devices for reading given the
advanatge
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advantage
 of accessibility,
however
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 I believe that the content will not be free as
advertisment
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advertising
 can cover only part of the costs and
incetives
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incentives
 to write about a limited amount of topics,
while
 there may be demand for other.
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