The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The figure shows the percentage regarding the number of
people
that born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
and outside Australia
living in three different areas in 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, the percentage of people
who born
outside Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
higher
than Add a missing verb
was higher
people
who born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
in 1995. Meanwhile, the percentage of people
who born
either outside or in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
has
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was
same
in 2010 which approximately 95% in total.
In 1995 and 2010, most Correct article usage
the same
people
living in cities are
born Wrong verb form
were
in
outside Change preposition
apply
Australia
. Moreover
, people
who live in towns slightly decreased both in 1995 and 2010. People
who live in rural areas is fluctuated
wildly in 1995 and 2010, which is approximately 30% Change to the active voice
fluctuates
fluctuated
people
born in Change preposition
of people
Australia
and 40% born in
outside Change preposition
apply
Australia
in 1995. In 2010, people
who live in rural areas slightly decreased which is approximately 15% was
born in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Australia
and 5% born
Add a missing verb
were born
in
outside Change preposition
apply
Australia
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