The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart provides information about the percentage of
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
in Australia Fix the agreement mistake
females
that
Correct word choice
who
di
regular physical activity in 2010 and divided Correct your spelling
did
by
six Change preposition
into
age
groups. Overall
, exercising was did
almost by women except in one range of Wrong verb form
done
age
group
. It can be seen that the percentage Fix the agreement mistake
groups
both
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of both
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
experienced fluctuation through the Fix the agreement mistake
females
age
group given.
The highest number of male
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males
did
regular physical activity was 52.8% in the Correct pronoun usage
who did
age
of 15 to 24. This
figure decreased dramatically by 10% in 25 to 34 years old and declined again in the age
of 35-44 at 39.5%. The percentage raised steadily in 65 and over at 46.7%.
Meanwhile, in
the Change preposition
at
age
of 15 to 24, there was only 47.7% of female
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females
exercising
. There was a slight Wrong verb form
exercised
increased
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increase
by
1.2% in 25-34 years old. Change preposition
of
This
proportion kept raising gradually until the age
of 55 to 64 at 53% before falling steeply at
47.1%.Change preposition
to
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