The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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in Australia

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regular physical activity in 2010 and divided

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six

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groups.

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almost by women except in one range of

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. It can be seen that the percentage

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experienced fluctuation through the

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group given. The highest number of

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regular physical activity was 52.8% in the

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of 15 to 24.

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figure decreased dramatically by 10% in 25 to 34 years old and declined again in the

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of 35-44 at 39.5%. The percentage raised steadily in 65 and over at 46.7%. Meanwhile,

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of 15 to 24, there was only 47.7% of

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. There was a slight

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1.2% in 25-34 years old.

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proportion kept raising gradually until the

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of 55 to 64 at 53% before falling steeply

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47.1%.