The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates did their degree and employers’ reasons for hiring them

The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates did their degree and employers’ reasons for hiring them
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The pie charts compare the views of
MBA
employees with their employers.
Overall
, it is obvious that the reasons for interest are totally different for both groups. With regards to
MBA
graduates,The most given reason to study
MBA
was seeking better chances to work with a
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cent reaching almost two-thirds of the questioned employees. reasons
such
as quality improvement jobs and personal development were less expressed with 15% and 12% , respectively.Only 8% wanted to study
MBA
in order to help others. Employers
on the other hand
valued personality and Knowledge at most with 25% given to each of these characters.Connection and Appearance were nearly valued
whereas
Qualification was not interesting as only 10% of work offers were interested in
this
field.
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