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Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up the equipment for your presentation. In your letter, you should: - tell when and where the presentation will take place - describe your arrangements - tell him/her what equipment you need. Please try to write at least 150 words.

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Dear Laura, I am writing to inquire you to assist me
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 the upcoming New Product Release 2023 conference. And I need you to contact the administrative staff of the company to coordinate and deliver some necessary equipment in the meeting room A09, where
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 to kick-off our new products with a presentation next Thursday. For
this
 meeting, I have informed relevant
managent
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management
 key roles, and corresponding customers by email. I am going to print meeting materials, and a name list
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today, it is convenient to contribute documents for each attendee beforehand. I believe that you are well-organized to do so based on
this
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this
 meeting and I need
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hgh-definition
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high-definition
 projector, better as 1080 pixels, with a remote
controler
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controller
control
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white board
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 with its pens,
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 a dozen bottles of
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mineral
 water if you can
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. The meeting will be started at 14:00
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 that day, and I will be there early at 13:30. Kindly let me know about your preparation status before 18:00 on next Wednesday. It will be bettter to adjust things if necessary. Wait for your reply soon. Yours sincerely, Jackson.
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