The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
The pie chart illustrates four methods of transport namely car, light rail transit,bus and taxi used by people in a city called Edmonton in proportion,
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the table specifically highlights the percentage of car users in five different activities. (Commute to work,shopping,leisure,taking children to school,and for business). Looking from an
overall
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perspective it is readily apparent that cars are the most preferred type of transport and it is used by many for travelling to the office.Bus and taxis were considered the least popular methods. With regards to the use of cars,45% of people are included under
this
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category as the mode of commuting.Light rail transit becoming the second most popular way ,accounts for 35% of the total.Meanwhile, buses and taxis could only attract 10% each. The majority of car users commute to work using it(55%).Taking children to school and attending business work account for 40% and 45% respectively.Shopping and leisure activities share the same proportion,15% each of total usage.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • public transportation
  • cultural attitudes
  • electric vs. traditional vehicles
  • peak hours
  • environmental implications
  • economic factors
  • socio-economic divide
  • technological advancements
  • public policy
  • environmental awareness
  • urban development
  • air quality
  • traffic congestion
  • accessibility
  • government initiatives
  • community actions
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