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Computer games are played by all children of different nationalities. But parents think that they are not very educational and are harmful. What do you think about.? Give opinions with examples.

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It has been argued that
their
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is
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 many environmental problems that we have to face,
while
 others
says
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 that the most issue is the
extenct
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extent
extinct
 of special types of plants and animals. In my opinion, I believe that we have more serious issues ,which are more dangerous than the death of some animals.In
this
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 I will
further
 address both sides and explain with examples.
To begin
, the
individeules
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individuals
 who are
convienced
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convinced
 that the earth is facing more
importent
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important
dissasters
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disasters
. They may think so for several reasons.
Firstly
, because of the rising of the
temperture
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temperature
 of the earth, many people are
sufferring
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suffering
 from it .
Secondly
, increasing the natural
dissasters
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disasters
disaster
 in general where many humans day every year from them .
For example
,
earthquike
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earthquake
earthquakes
,
tornedo
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tornados
 and
flowting
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flowing
floating
following
 incidents have
went
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gone
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 up in the past few years.
However
, other people
says
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say
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 that the
extenction
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extinction
 of several creatures is the main problem ,
whereas
 other issues can wait.
This
 may be the case for them since
the
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they
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 are more
interstant
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interesting
interstate
 in them or they are
emotionaly
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emotionally
 connected with them.
Furthermore
 , the bond between humans and other living beings make human have
compation
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companion
compassion
to
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 weaker
creatuer
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creature
creatures
 who can not defend themselves.
To conclude
, many people see
the
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animals and plants are the most important
creaturs
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creatures
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 to look after because they feel sorry for them as they can not survive in
aggresive condetions
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aggressive conditions
.
on the other hand
, other humans see that many environmental issues are
their
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 and it
requares
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requires
 our attention to deal with them
otherwise
 all living beings will suffer from natural
dissasters
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disasters
 that can change the shape of life on earth if we stud and do nothing .
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