The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
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The line graph illustrates the number of units of
electricity
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consumed by the British on daily basis during
summer
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and
winter
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,
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the pie chart gives information about the domestic use of
electricity
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in four different areas in proportions. Looking from an
overall
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perspective it is readily apparent that usage of
electricity
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is much higher in
Winter
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than in
Summer
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and towards ,nighttime it shows a slight increase in both seasons.Heating rooms and water are the main purposes of domestic power supply. In
Winter
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,consumption is between 30000-50000 units of
electricity
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while
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it is around 10000-20000 in
Summer
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.Early morning hours are considered off-peak in both seasons but during
winter
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rise to 40000 units around 3 am.During the late hours( around 20-23 ) usage increases and reaches a peak of just below 50000 and 20000 in
winter
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and
summer
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respectively. More than half of the
electricity
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is channelled to heating purposes (52.5%).Meanwhile , lighting,tv,radio group and vacuum cleaners,food mixers, and electric tools category share an equal proportion of the
electricity
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supply, 15% each.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, summer, winter with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demand for electricity
  • typical days
  • line graph
  • seasonal variation
  • peak
  • fluctuations
  • exceeds
  • units of electricity
  • distribution of electricity usage
  • heating
  • water heating
  • combined total
  • major uses
  • lighting
  • ovens
  • kettles
  • washing machines
  • miscellaneous appliances
  • electronics
  • total usage
  • account for
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