The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The maps illustrate how the waterfront
area
in Darwin changed over the 4-year period.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly from the map that this
area
turned from a
industrial Change the article
an
area
to a residential one in order to be eco-friendlier to the environment in Darwin. Another notable feature is the construction of the habour
near the sea which enhances the transportation in the Correct your spelling
harbour
town
.
Looking at the map, we can see that the majority of the industrial area
has been erected to make room for more trees and amenities. In the North of the map, while
the industrial area
has been replaced by the swimming pool, there were no alternations to the school, convention centre and lake. In the middle of the town
, there were
Change the verb form
was
construction
of 3 residential buildings, which Add an article
the construction
adjacent
to the three previous ones. Add a missing verb
were adjacent
In addition
, a university was built in the West of the town
.
With regard to access, in the sea of the town
, the habour
was constructed. Correct your spelling
harbour
In addition
, there was a construction of a footpath which connected the newly-constructed habour
with the main road in the West of the Correct your spelling
harbour
town
.Meanwhile, the footpath which encircled the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
town
witnessed no changes.Submitted by bobong120906 on
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