Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people are in believe that, if a country industrialized and succeeded financially, it could have pure habitat.

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, the others completely disagree with the first group. I will consider both opinions and

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, I will elaborate on my idea. The industrial revolution has been started about 200 years ago based on using fossil fuel and chemical components. So, having used these pollutant materials, people found their natural habitat polluted. critics say that supply and demand are nuts and bolts of the economy.

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, having raised demands, the financial system has to increase productivity,

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, lots of poisonous gas and sewage will be emitted.

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, The USA and China are the most industrial

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in the world and have been suffering from air and run-off water pollution.

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, some people state that by having legislated incentives and preventive rules, authorities could prevent natural disasters and contaminations.

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, in some Scandinavian countries that have a dab hand in the automobile industry, by forgiving and reducing the tax rates and banning some rules to filter their gas emission, governments prevent and

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the environment. I think

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by using perilous fossil fuel in trade our atmosphere and land are about to be destroyed

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by scheming and programming in true ways we can do prophylaxis reactions. In conclusion, there are two main points of view about financial prosperity and the air quality in countries as

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, industrialisation ousts and destroys natural habitat , and

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, by planning both of them are credible.

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coherence cohesion

The introduction and conclusion are present, but they lack depth and clarity. The essay needs to provide a clear judgment on both views and develop it further.

coherence cohesion

There is a logical structure in the essay, and the main points are supported, but the development of ideas is lacking clarity and depth. Use topic sentences and transition words to connect ideas more effectively.

task achievement

The essay addresses the task, but the response is incomplete. The arguments need to be developed more extensively with relevant examples and clear judgments.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

256 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Economically successful
Clean environment
Sustainable practices
Green technologies
Eco-tourism
Healthier workforce
Healthcare costs
Short-term economic growth
Profit over environment
Heavy industries
Developing countries
Sacrifice
Economic development
Transitioning
Balance
Sustainable development
International cooperation
Incentivize
Eco-friendly business practices
Investment in education

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