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Many people today find they have insufficient time to spend with their families, because of pressures of work. What problems does this create for individuals and their families? What solutions can you propose? Which would be the most effective solution, in your view?

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We are living in
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 days of the millennium. The world is growing beyond leaps and bounds,
thus
 creating a
culture
 of needs. To suffice
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this
, employees are compelled to
work
over
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time
 and have to take the burden
to
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 their families. It is asserted that
due to
work related
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stress
, people are no longer able to enjoy quality
time
 with the family.
This
 trend has serious repercussions and
this
 essay divulges the problems generated
due to
 surging workload and
stress
.
To begin
 with, the increased
stress
 associated with
work
 and deteriorating family
time
 lead to plummeting job
statisfaction
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satisfaction
 among the workers.
This
further
 leads to absenteeism, burnout and magnifying turnover in staff,
consequently
 resulting in decreased productivity and
work
 satisfaction. One
such
 example is increased resignation among the hospital staff during
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 pandemic.
Furthermore
, imploding family
time
,
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unlike
 anything can lead to
lonliness
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loneliness
 and depression
among
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 the working community. Shifting towards the second school of thought, higher rates of domestic violence are attributable to the increasing
work
 pressure and lesser relaxation
time
 with family.
This
further
 can pave
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the path
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 for higher divorce rates.
For instance
, during COVID-19, there was a surge in divorce rates among
the
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doctors, owing to their increased job
stress
.
Additionally
,
this
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can
also
 impact the
behavior
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 of children.
However
, there are efficient steps that can be
par taken
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 to ameliorate
this
 situation. Organisations should lay down policies on working
culture
 and
employ
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 assistance programs for
thier
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their
 staff.
Further
, an effective
leadship
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leadership
 should be established, where the subjects can discuss
the
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 concerns and pressure
to
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with
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 their directors.
In addition
 to
this
, people should develop a family
culture
 that ensures
ample
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 amount of
time
 spent with family. To summarise,
work
 pressure can impact the
time
 spent with the family and thereby affect the mental and
the
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physical health of
individual
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the individual
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as well as
 the organisation.
However
, undertaking certain steps can reduce the impact of
this
 and I strongly believe establishing a positive
work
culture
 and
an
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effective leadership is the most vital step.
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