Nowadays, education is increasing
day
by
day
but some people think
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home schoolingCorrect your spelling
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is more effective for
children
's development and
think
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school
is more important for them. I
that,
school
is better for
childrenChange noun form
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development and get more opportunities.
On the one hand, beyond
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, kids who are doing studies at
house get more chances to stay with their parents and
grand parentsCorrect your spelling
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.
For instance
,
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university
on
children
and Correct word choice
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revealed that
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who study at
home
areChange the verb form
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willCorrect your spelling
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developed because they stay with their parents
,
as a result
, they are capable of improving family connections.
moreover
, it is easier to focus
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evaluate their conditions at
home
.
hence
, their grandparents can help them when they need it and
heyCorrect your spelling
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feel on could nine.
On the other hand
,
school
is better for all the
children
. They get
chanceCorrect article usage
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to collaborate with
children
and
. To
, if there are individuals from different
areaFix the agreement mistake
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in the same
school
, as a
, student
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communicate with each other. they need to learn different
and not only that but
also
they will capable to learn new thing
day
by
day
.
Furthermore
, they
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tryChange the form of the verb
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to do some
sportChange the noun form
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activities in groups,
itCorrect pronoun usage
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helps them to have good physical and mental health.
In addition
,
knowCorrect subject-verb agreement
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their position among their classmates and they can focus on better performance.
Thus
, They can learn many
thingChange to a plural noun
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in
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school
.
To sum up
, more
children
are sitting alone at the
home
, it is
to join in the
so that it
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their development.
support of
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argument,
school
is good for them because they learn precise many
thingChange to a plural noun
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in the
school
.
Finally
, collaboration is a great way to learn new
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,
such
as ports, are
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musicCorrect word choice
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.