In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? D o you think it is a positive or negative development?

In recent times,
companies
are launching
products
in markets through commercial films as their
products
are new in some way. There are some reasons for
this
trend
such
as business firms
want
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to
fullfil
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fulfil
consumers
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consumers'
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needs, they want to
competetive
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competitive
in front of counterparts and increase their
profit
margin. I believe that
this
is a positive development because
this
kind of emphasises helps
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the consumer
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consumer
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consumers
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to understand more about that product and purchase the right product as per their needs.
Apart from
this
,
companies
could get more incentives. Producing commodities in
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noval
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novel
way is because of many reasons. The prime reason is that the
companies
have to satisfy
customers
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requirements. By
this
i
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mean,
thesedays
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these days
, people have preferences in all commodities like quality, quantity, and price range.
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this
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needs, there are some more :
color
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and packaging in common. To cite an example, in India, individuals desire to purchase mobile phones with
a
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plenty of features
such
as camera clarity, colour, packaging, internal and external memory and
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to use. In order to achieve
this
popular brands like
samsung
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Samsung
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, apple, and
nokia
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Nokia
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try to produce mobile phones with at least one new feature in every model. Another pertinent reason is
that
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the counterparts for their
products
. To explain
further
, every branded
goods
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has
same
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features in
same
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price range. In order to compete with them business firms emphasise their goods
noval
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novel
in many ways,
otherwise
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their firm may lead to
bankrupt
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.
For instance
,
Nokia
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the Nokia
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brand was famous for their strong keypad phone but in time their company breaks down
due to
lack
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of
novality
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novelty
ovality
in their
products
,
however
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they try to
pickup
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their firm at present. Presenting
novelty
in
products
always has benefits
such
as
increase
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an increase
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in
sale
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sales
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and
profit
. The key advantage is that
companies
could sell their
products
at any time as
consumer
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a consumer
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always needs anything new in
products
. By
this
i
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mean,
due to
techological
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technological
advancement customers
wants
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want
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new features in everything to improve their life.
For example
, Apple
products
are
launching
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with very minimal change like colour and camera size,
although
people prefer to buy new
products
which
has
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minimal
novelty
due to
their preferences. Apart from the benefit that
i
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mentioned just before, new
products
helps
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industries to achieve their
profit
margin and incentives. Apple company producing new
products
with minimal
novelty
could increase their earnings and establishment in
mobile
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industry. In conclusion, business firms produce goods with some
novelty
because of tight competition among counterparts, in order to improve their income or incentives
,
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and to satisfy consumers as per their needs. I reckon that
this
is a positive development in
this
epoch as it helps customers to identify
right
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the right
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products
and satisfy their needs.
Companies
can make more
profit
through
this
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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