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Many governments spend a lot of money on art. Some people think this investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The question of whether to spend money on art or to invest them in healthcare and educational systems is extremely topical today, as so many countries are struggling with
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 to raise the standard of living?”. Both sides of
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 the side which believes that improving
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 system is more important, would-be Maslow’s hierarchy of needs. Where it is said, if physiological needs are not satisfied,
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 will not without medical help. But for
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education, art can rightly be called
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 of the most important parts of education,
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 without knowledge of math or
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 it is likely that people will struggle with providing their life level. Taken from another viewpoint, opponents of improving culture in their countries point out many advantages.
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 mass of tourists can be attracted by putting a thought-provoking sculpture on the street, which is
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 scheme for the economical part of the government.
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, the arts cultivate young imaginations and facilitate success in school, enhancing academic achievement in multiple subject areas. They provide the critical thinking, communications and innovation skills essential to a productive 21st-century
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.
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, the arts foster physical, mental and emotional health, aiding recovery processes and contributing to well-being. Arts therapy is a medically and economically effective tool for treating ageing adults, children and people suffering from trauma.
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 health and educational spheres.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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