The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph represents the variation in the proportion of elderly people staying in
USA
, Sweden, and Correct article usage
the USA
Japan
over years
( 1940- 20240).
Gediatric aged people living in society has increased through the decades. In the initial years
, per cent was high in the USA. While
,
in the present century highest rates are observed in Sweden. Remove the comma
apply
furthermore
, in , the the
future it's predicted to be by Remove the redundancy
apply
Japan
.
In the late 19th century, old dependents are low to only about 15 per cent of the total population in all 3 countries. while
, there was a a
steep decline in Remove the redundancy
apply
Japan
around 1960, which remained steady for the next 40 years
. Thereafter
, there was a sudden increase around 2000.
In the next 20 years
, though Japan
and USA have seen a raise while
Swedes were constant. Scientists are expecting that in the upcoming years
, older people's occupancy will be a major percentage reaching upto 25Submitted by sreya.nimmagadda9 on
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