The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph represents the variation in the proportion of elderly people staying in
USA
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, Sweden, and
Japan
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over
years
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( 1940- 20240). Gediatric aged people living in society has increased through the decades. In the initial
years
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, per cent was high in the USA.
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in the present century highest rates are observed in Sweden.
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future it's predicted to be by
Japan
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. In the late 19th century, old dependents are low to only about 15 per cent of the total population in all 3 countries.
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steep decline in
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around 1960, which remained steady for the next 40
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.
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, there was a sudden increase around 2000. In the next 20
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, though
Japan
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and USA have seen a raise
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Swedes were constant. Scientists are expecting that in the upcoming
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, older people's occupancy will be a major percentage reaching upto 25
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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