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There are more cars on the roads this days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. what do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do this outweigh the advantages?

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Nowadays, there are countless cars on roads as one of many reasons
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vehicles
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 incidents. To obliterate crashes issue, some politicians
reccomend
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recommend
 a policy which offers drivers should take driving exams during their lives. There are numerous benefits based on
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phenomenon
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 which will be elucidated in the following paragraphs.
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 with, the driving test is constructed to make
people
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 become
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who
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understand
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 a plethora of rules on the road.
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, before I exerted my
motocycle
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motorcycle
 as a professional driver, I took the test and I was learning as a preparation via searching
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 pieces of knowledge about driving.
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, I am qualified to use my vehicles on the streets in view of
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 aspects
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gained by me when I learned before the exam.
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, I have a notion that if the
tests
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 are continued, we might decrease
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 number of
vehicles
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 accidents
due to
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people
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 will have enough ethics on the highway. Turning to another aspect, based on psychology research,
people
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's
personality
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 can alter.
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, the driving abilities which have been mastered all
this
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 time have
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 to decrease.
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,
person
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 who does not drive
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in
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long
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 time or
people
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 who have
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psychology
 problems are not prowess to sit in the
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 seat
due to
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 the massive risks which will happen.
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,
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professional
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 are indispensable, not only just to review
someone
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's ability,
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,
it
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 can identify that
someone
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 does not have mental problems which might cause road accidents.
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, repeating driving
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 every some
periods
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 have
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the probabilities
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probabilities
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 to decline the incidents.
To conclude
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, I agree that the proposed policy will be able to obliterate the problems on the streets like
vehicle
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crash
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crashes
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. It happens
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because
the
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driving
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 can analyze
someone
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's capability through mental and driving ability.
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,
someone
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 will have adequate information about the laws on the highway.

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