Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
It is commonly believed that the best solution to solve the ongoing traffic and pollution dilemma is to increase the price of petrol. Personally, I completely disagree with
this
point of view for a variety of reasons and there are other measures that might be effective.
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To begin
with, the view of increasing the cost of petrol is unreasonable. Linking Words
This
means that for privileged individuals, Linking Words
this
action is not even close to affecting their gas usage. Linking Words
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, for the people who are living in poverty, the method will detrimentally affect their job and living. Linking Words
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also
directly affects the economic market of the country. Linking Words
Therefore
, raising the fee for gas is not at all the best way to reduce pollution and transport issues.
In spite of these circumstances, there are various measures that governments, individuals, and companies could take to solve the problems. The first solution is for the government to widen the road and improve the existing public transport, which certainly helps people to travel more easily, limiting traffic jams and personal vehicles. The second measure would be creating campaigns to encourage citizens to plant more trees, Linking Words
this
can reduce environmental problems. Linking Words
In addition
, there is no doubt that using public transport or walking and cycling to travel around can reduce air and transportation problems.
In conclusion, raising the price of gasoline is not an effective method to solve the problem of environmental pollution and traffic, there are other actions that can be taken to tackle these dilemmas.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite