the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives information about the types of crime practised in the city named Newport city centre from the year 2003- 2012.
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, it provides details regarding the changes that took place in various methods. The city has been subject to many offences like burglary, car theft, and robbery ( theft from the person). In the year ,2003 burglary had its peak
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by end of 2012 it was very rarely done by thieves and the highest is by car theft. In early 2000, burglary was the major cause for the people ( 3500 incidents per annum) who came to the police stations.But later on, with increased awareness and security system , there was a steep decrease .Regarding ,robbery the rate has been nearly steady over the years as very few (less than 1000 cases) are filed as a complaint. Though
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the number of car thefts reported decreased gradually in the year 2004, surprisingly, there was a slow rise making it the most popular act by thieves.In conclusion, the most practised mischief by criminals varied
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