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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
#money #businesses #responsibilities
It is argued
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some people that entrepreneurs have to make profits and accomplish social obligations at the same time.
However
, I do agree that companies are responsible for the community rather than simply
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reveneur
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revenue
revenuer
. On the one hand, it is undeniable that businesses make money
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 an important role in the government. The more money they make, the more taxes they have. These taxes can be used to spend on many social activities
such
 as building new schools, renovating public facilities or maintaining
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 function. Another thing is that businesses which make money expand, leading to creating more jobs and larger the job market.
On the other hand
, corporations should have responsibilities
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 society. The first thing is, businesses must not harm the environment.
For example
, global warming is increasing day by day
due to
 factory emissions, which could be eliminated if they take action immediately.
In addition
, they are
also
 responsible for disposing of waste by building waste treatment plants or treating exhaust fumes and waste before being discharged.
Besides
, profits made by companies should be put back
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 the community through charitable activities or financing scholarships. Taking Unilever as an example, not only
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quality
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 of life for people around the world through its quality products and services
,
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 but
also
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 responsibilities to the community with a lot of programmes like "P/S protects Vietnamese smile" which funding for children to go to school, "OMO builds
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 for kids" brings kids in rural area
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easy access to enjoy outside activities. In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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