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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
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The line charts compare the number of local and overseas
students
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 enrolled in Australian universities over the
period
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 of years of 2001 to 2010.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the total number of both local and overseas
students
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 increased noticeably.
However
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, the number of local commencing
students
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 was held at a relatively stable level over the whole recorded
period
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. Focusing on the chart showing the data about overseas
students
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, there were about 20,000 overseas
students
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 who chose Australian universities and about 10,000
students
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 who were commended in 2001. The figures had the tendency to bulge with over 80,000
students
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 in total counting and 40,000
students
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 who were commended in 2010. In the second line chart, there were 40,000 local
students
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 who enrolled in their local universities.
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, the figure increased gradually and reached the pack with 60,000
students
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 in 2007, and kept it at the rest of the recorded
period
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.
However
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, the amount of commencing
students
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 were fluctuating around 20,000 over that 10-year
period
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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