The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
The line charts compare the number of local and overseas
students
enrolled in Australian universities over the period
of years of 2001 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total number of both local and overseas students
increased noticeably. However
, the number of local commencing students
was held at a relatively stable level over the whole recorded period
.
Focusing on the chart showing the data about overseas students
, there were about 20,000 overseas students
who chose Australian universities and about 10,000 students
who were commended in 2001. The figures had the tendency to bulge with over 80,000 students
in total counting and 40,000 students
who were commended in 2010.
In the second line chart, there were 40,000 local students
who enrolled in their local universities. Also
, the figure increased gradually and reached the pack with 60,000 students
in 2007, and kept it at the rest of the recorded period
. However
, the amount of commencing students
were fluctuating around 20,000 over that 10-year period
.Submitted by sam132457 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, period with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
▼