The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population age 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population age 65 and above in three countries.
The graph compares the percentage of the
population
aged 65 and over in Canada,
Germany
and the
UK
from 1988 to 2030.
Overall
,
it is clear
that
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the proportion of the
population
in each country between 1988 and 2030.The
UK
witnessed to smallest changes over a period of 12 years. Looking
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further
, around 20% of
Germany
were aged 65 and over, compared to 14% of the
UK
and 16% of Canada people. The proportion of elderly people in Canada and
Germany
rose to around 5% gradually over the next 12 years, reaching 21% and 25% respectively.
However
,the figures for the
UK
just remained minimum raise up to 1% from 14% in 1988 to 15% in 2000. Given the future trend,it can be seen that the
population
of the three countries will be raised by 5% by 2030. The percentage of the ageing
population
in
Germany
will arrive at a peak point of 30%. By 2030, It is thought that 26% of the Canadian
population
will be 65 years old and over,
while
the figures for the
UK
will be slightly lower than others, at 20%.
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