Although more and more people use public transport, some city streets are still overcrowded with traffic. How can this problem be solved? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
It is an undeniable fact that
due to
the increase
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public
transportation, a lot of cities are getting worse road Change preposition
in public
condition
, some Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
people
argue that both government and individuals
should make use
an effort to reduce traffic conjestion
.
It is evident that Correct your spelling
congestion
people
who want to live in a big city have to commute every day and most of them use
public transport
. This
is because the governments encorage
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encourage
people
to use
public transport
to get rid of air polluthin
, which leads them to Correct your spelling
pollution
use
public transport
. For example
, many countries campaign to use
public transport
, they allow people
to commute by using public tranport
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transport
also
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to citizen
citizen
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citizens
such
as discounting public transport
costs and reducing fuel.
To allevolate
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alleviate
this
porblem
, both Correct your spelling
problem
gorvenment
and Correct your spelling
government
governments
individuals
should try to resolve this
problem. When it comes to governments, they should enact accurate regulations. In terms of individuals
, they should give appropreate
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appropriate
idea
to the authorities. Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
For instance
, the
governments should adjust Correct article usage
apply
commuting
time to request companies, which makes roads not Add an article
the commuting
be
crowded. Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, the gorvenment
should plan a project to make wide and new roads Correct your spelling
government
by
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apply
long term
design. Add a hyphen
long-term
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is due to
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the short
short term
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short-term
plan
would be Fix the agreement mistake
plans
failure
, which makes Add an article
a failure
government's
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the government's
finane
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finance
finances
For example
, it has been shown in a number of developing countries.
In conclusion, it is important that both government and individuals
should make an effort to reduce traffic congestion, which make
it convenient for Change the verb form
makes
people
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