All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that the vehicles which are using gas should be restricted and
instead
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, electric ones should
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.
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essay will agree that electric
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should replace them.
Firstly
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, Electric
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are good for
environment
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and for the second reason electric is cheaper and renewable. Since the beginning, fossil
fuels
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are dealing damaging effects on our planet.The pollution that fossil fuel causes to the environment is a huge problem for the future of our world.
On the other hand
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are less harmful to the environment because they produce less carbon
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dioxide
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silent than
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gas one not only air pollution sound pollution is
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lower.
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traffic.
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I want to relax but when I open the windows for fresh air, I am hearing a lot of car noises and it disturb me if there was an electric
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cars
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all around there will be no dirty car noises. Fossil
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are unrenewable and their price is constantly going up. Fossil
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are limited sources of our world and
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they will extinct.
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produced
and renewable there is
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plenty of
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to produce electricity.
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economic side
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this
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problem. Because of the limited sources, eventually prices will go up and people not be able to find any
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for their
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. Electricity always will be cheaper than fossil
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. Because of the war between Russia and Ukraine
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prices surged recently and in our country inflation goes up rapidly because of
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petrol if
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electric
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were used for transportation there would be less effect
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our economy.
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should be used if we want to build a good future for our children and
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for ourselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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