Rich countries often give money to poorer countries,but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is indisputable fact that wealthy
countries
do not solve poverty if they are spending their money
to
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countries
. Other people argue to give not only financial aid,
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also
other ammunitions. In apropos of the argument, I completely disagree with this
statement due to
corruption and the nation's policy
.
Many poor countries
corrupt money
because of the unpleasant personalities of the government. The government will realize that developing infrastructures and educational systems need a lot of money
, therefore
they use funds for themself. For example
, one of the authorities in Indonesia, uses the money
to party instead
of improving technologies, resulting in an undeveloped country. Not only unimportant actions,
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also
unindependent because the nation will lend money
to other nations, like China,
if the Remove the comma
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money
is run out.
Another point to consider is the fact that policy
in poor countries
is not satisfactory. The policy
is not completely perfect, which means the population does not know well where the money
was spent. The population pay taxes to the government, and the money
is held by the wrong hands, which result in building unnecessary
monument and does not focus on crucial buildings. To illustrate Add an article
the unnecessary
this
, in my city, the main road is still broken for around 2 years even though society pays taxes every month, whereas
the budget in
the websites shows that it is extremely enormous.
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To sum up
, wealthy nations are not capable to solve poverty issues by donating funds and individuals argue about other goods rather than financial aid. In this
case, I totally disagree because of corruption and policy
by its state.Submitted by rafiaufa18 on
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