Rich countries often give money to poorer countries,but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is indisputable fact that wealthy

countries

do not solve poverty if they are spending their

money

to

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poorer

countries

. Other people argue to give not only financial aid

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but

also

other ammunitions. In apropos of the argument, I completely disagree with

this

statement

due to

corruption and the nation's

policy

. Many poor

countries

corrupt

money

because of the unpleasant personalities of the government. The government will realize that developing infrastructures and educational systems need a lot of

money

,

therefore

they use funds for themself.

For example

, one of the authorities in Indonesia, uses the

money

to party

instead

of improving technologies, resulting in an undeveloped country. Not only unimportant actions

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but

also

unindependent because the nation will lend

money

to other nations, like China

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if the

money

is run out. Another point to consider is the fact that

policy

in poor

countries

is not satisfactory. The

policy

is not completely perfect, which means the population does not know well where the

money

was spent. The population pay taxes to the government, and the

money

is held by the wrong hands, which result in building

unnecessary

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monument and does not focus on crucial buildings. To illustrate

this

, in my city, the main road is still broken for around 2 years even though society pays taxes every month,

whereas

the budget

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the websites shows that it is extremely enormous.

To sum up

, wealthy nations are not capable to solve poverty issues by donating funds and individuals argue about other goods rather than financial aid. In

this

case, I totally disagree because of corruption and

policy

by its state.