In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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period , many businesses tend to highlight their items that

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are really new

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anyway

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.From my point of view ,

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very useful and bring advantages to

customer

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who

also

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concerns about

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quality of what they afford to be owned .

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, the most important thing why the producer ought to assume and prove obviously products which created by them is the belief of buyer . Nowadays , people have checked carefully and

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worried about so

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, including

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. They will put many

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in their mind that it is new or used and when it

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causes poor feelings and disappointed tendencies when using

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a long

time

. So proving clearly that it is not

such

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old product that couldn’t be used play an important role in businesses . On the other

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the merchant

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merchant

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can give enough necessary information relating to problems of worrying and annoying ,

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the resident

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resident

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will have many different looks and comfortable tendencies during using

time

as they realize that it is quite similar to a good aspect for self by benefits inside . There are many solutions for improving

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of

buyer

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through

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emphasizing new products . The most popular

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in my experience

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maybe

instead

trying to say that ‘it is really a new” , businesses should

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build up beliefs

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some way like putting clear details about how

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to date

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or ingredients .

This

is not only the most flexible way to transfer quickly but

also

not consuming lots of

time

of

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both

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seller and user. In conclusion , unfortunately , nowadays many people have still conceived cheap is the best choice , so

this

issue is leading to many poor health problems and for a long

time

, it will become bad effects for a long

time

by original unobvious items . The sellers who

supplying

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requirements which

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new are going to play a role in health development to prevent people from drawbacks of

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things by sufficient

informations

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.