As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibilty towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Huge companies, large

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and successful businesses, are big players

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social events, sometimes their one

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could change a stock market of a country. some say

this

impact

lead

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this companies

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to have major responsibility against society but others believe that

business men

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and

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women

are just should

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to take care of their employers

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the whole community.

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, I want to

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that I

am agree

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that

corporation

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are influence

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people,

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they should play

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their role as

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influencer

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.

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, imagine a cloth big brand which has lots of fans and buyer

also

famous among young person, if

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brand announce that education is not good enough on social media, I am pretty sure that the rate of applying for university is going to reduce

after

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news

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because teenagers admire the managers so whatever they say is going to impact on people immediately ,

for

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reason

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they should wisely react and involve in

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challenges.

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, I

am completely understand

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why some folks

are disagree

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with me on

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matter, they bring

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this

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idea that

if

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cooparations

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corporations

cooperations

are responsible

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their communities so what's the role of government here ? they discuss that some

organisation

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should make money and

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other should make culture , and these two are better

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not

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to

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each other jobs.

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: a singer should just

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the fans not give

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about climate

changing

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. the singer should leave

this

project to the ones who have knowledge about that. In conclusion, I believe that we are leaving in the age of

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, social media and big communication tools, nowadays everything around us

impact

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on

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our

life

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lives

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,

such

as big companies so it's better that they manage their responsibility against people

of

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their community , so we can have

better

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life together.