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As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibilty towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that these days business has a high effect on society in various ways .
Therefore
, we can that businesses
also
 have a duty towards the community. The question is, what are the responsibilities that businesses have in order of population? In
this
 essay, I am going to show to what extent I agree with
this
 view.
Firstly
, in terms of causes ,unlike the thought of others that it is a redundant career and does not help the community to develop business companies
also
 care and assist to improve the economy and the world in several ways. The main reason to support
this
 claim is that everything is related to
this
 industry ,
for example
, education, health, economics and many other categories. To illustrate,
also
 it has reinforced the contrary income and decreased the unemployment rate by more than 10 per cent in the
last
 decade.
In other words
, businesses created an opportunity for employees to join volunteer works which can spread out great moral behaviour standard which increases the individual inferred . In conclusion ,
although
 there are some people who could disagree with my opinion I believe that they should consider the benefit that trade accrues to us and how they raise awareness ,
also
 I believe that they have a very crucial role to do . There where I can say that I truly agree with
this
 view
nevertheless
 we as a part of
this
 society must support all the categories and units of our power.
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