You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

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Dear manager I regret to write

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letter as I had a very bad experience despite the huge amount of room service price

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to other taxes and I did not even think of it in my dream having a day without water and spending my whole day inside of the room not having the bath and drink too. As you heard, I called and emailed the room service department to get quick assistance and nobody answered and acknowledged my issue

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, I reach out to your front desk reception lady Ms Shan and she helped me to get enough water quickly. I felt she was a really versatile task execution member and was happy to talk with her for a

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,I would suggest you keep a meticulous plan in place to overcome

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issue in future. One should not have any problem regarding the water. It may put your hotel in a bad situation no matter what kind of technology you are using. If possible, please double-check twice a day which may help to avoid and things can be controlled before it gets worse fingers are crossed. I look forward to hearing an update to

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letter with great appreciation to Ms Shan. Best regards Lakshmi

lakshma999Tue Feb 21 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

209 words

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