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Does Internet need to be controlled by the government?

#internet #government
Technology is the most advanced in all
over
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the world
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everybody has
accessed
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 to it. Some
People
 are saying that the information should be secure by the government authority. Other humankind said that it is a free source code that everyone can access it. In
this
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 I will discuss both views and give some strong ideas.
Firstly
, the web is known
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common
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 in
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society. It helps us to do so many things, let us take the
used
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 of
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cyberspace from the companies that I know
they
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use the
Internet
 to
helps
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 them to communicate around the world.
On the other hand
, most
of
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people
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works
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 from home
duo
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 to
internet
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, and we interact with our parents , friends,
relatives
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 so we even do all the transactions online wherever
you
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 are .
Moreover
, it helps us to do all the shopping online.
Therefore
 , it is important that it should not be secured by the government.
For instance
, we all receive our monthly wage online because of the wild wide web.
Secondly
 , the
internet
 should be controlled by the authority,
due to
 the fact that some human
being
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 misused it, many hackers had absorbed the personal data from banking systems and used it from looting money from customers.
Additionally
,
this
 information stored on the
internet
are
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 sold by big IT companies for handsome amounts of money. some
of
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the
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teenagers have
had
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used it to
washed
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the
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pornography
that is
 not permitted for them.
For example
, in Guinea Conakry, I child to a video from his parents when they were making loved and I suddenly posted it without knowing.
To conclude
, the
internet
 has been dedicated for the sake of
people
, but some misused it against other
people
. Let us use it for our own development.
Submitted by singmahesh on

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