Does Internet need to be controlled by the government?

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Technology is the most advanced in all
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the world
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everybody has
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to it. Some
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are saying that the information should be secure by the government authority. Other humankind said that it is a free source code that everyone can access it. In
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I will discuss both views and give some strong ideas.
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, the web is known
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in
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society. It helps us to do so many things, let us take the
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of
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cyberspace from the companies that I know
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use the
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them to communicate around the world.
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, most
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people
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works
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from home
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to
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, and we interact with our parents , friends,
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so we even do all the transactions online wherever
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are .
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, it helps us to do all the shopping online.
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, it is important that it should not be secured by the government.
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, we all receive our monthly wage online because of the wild wide web.
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, the
internet
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should be controlled by the authority,
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the fact that some human
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misused it, many hackers had absorbed the personal data from banking systems and used it from looting money from customers.
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,
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information stored on the
internet
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are
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sold by big IT companies for handsome amounts of money. some
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teenagers have
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used it to
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pornography
that is
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not permitted for them.
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, in Guinea Conakry, I child to a video from his parents when they were making loved and I suddenly posted it without knowing.
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, the
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has been dedicated for the sake of
people
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, but some misused it against other
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. Let us use it for our own development.
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