Some people thinks it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them, Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagrees with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The importance of choosing a friend who
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the same opinion or
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someone who disagrees with them
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has always been debatable,
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now become even more controversial. It can be strongly agreed upon to the fact that
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matter has some convincing arguments, despite the contention about it. Many believe that having a friend who always
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identical view, is a good sign of trust and strong friendship. Being on
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how close they are and how well they understand and know each other. But
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the flip side, there are some who assume there are few negative
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type of companion, but the most alarming one lies in the fact that, if we have
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wrong thoughts and our
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with them or have similar views
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it gives us
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false confidence.
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it is not always wise to have
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who always accord with our judgments. Research in
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shows that 40% of people who have
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with them show more self-possession and fearlessness.
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, having
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mates who sometimes disagree with us is not just necessary but
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beneficial. The reason is cause showing different views will help us see and appreciate
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helps to grow respect among
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research in some studies shows that
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who have different
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have a strong bond
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them,
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statement can not be ignored.
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I personally agree with the
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declaration, because I like to hear my friend's ideas and view on
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we discuss.
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helps not just our
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but
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assist me to learn new things and recommendation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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