Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a results. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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modern world, health is the most important part of our life and in order to achieve that people need to not just eat

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world, many working individuals find it hard to accomplish those goals

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it has been found that most of the working public

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health issues, in the form of eating unhealthy food or not being able to do any form of exercise in their daily life. There are numerous reasons for

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their busy schedule at work, many of them are tired and have no energy to hit the gym or do any kind of physical

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. Others are lazy and just can not be bothered to go to

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and to add on top of their laziness they like to go partying on the weekends and sleep throughout the whole weekend

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, people who are married and have kids, prefer to spend time with their family going out and shopping or

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time with their family. Studies from

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a bad health record, with a history of no exercise or healthy eating. In order to address

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problem, experts say that we need to start bringing

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change in our life, no matter how small it is. To start with, we need to start by waking up early and doing some light

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for 20 mins walking in the park either early in the morning or after dinner. After a week or two

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, the next big step would be to join a gym and get a trainer to get us

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a routine to follow for the next couple of months. Once we get used to

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specific plan, we start to feel the change in our body and feel more hungry,

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we start to learn to do meal prep work at home which saves us money and is more healthy at the same time. It would be hard not to socialise with our friends and family, so we need to reduce our alcohol intake. By following these steps we assure you that we will see the benefits of it in the future.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a results. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Include an introduction and conclusion

you are applying for a job and need a letter if reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: Give details of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live it. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Some people say that in the modern world, getting old is entirely bad. Others, however, say that life for the elderly nowadays is much better than it was in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Walking is known to be beneficial for health yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days. What are the reason for this? What can be done to tackle this problem?