Some people prefer to shop in traditional stores. Other people prefer to do their shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern
world
we have a Add a comma
,world
lot
of opportunities, which make our daily life easier. Some of them can allow us to save time
for the most important things. We can use certain websites or apps for shopping online. According to
that, we can buy food
, clothes, tools, electronic devices or things for pets just staying
at home. Change preposition
by staying
Moreover
, we don’t
need to be at home and wait for our goods
to be delivered. We decide and choose the right time
when it will happen. However
, there are a lot
of people
who don’t
support that idea and want to shop by themselves.
Despite the fact that a lot
of us live in really comfortable conditions and we also
have some stores
nearby home and office, our life becomes very fast. We always need to rush, we don’t
have enough time
for our habits or family. The first reason
for shopping online is to be willing to save time
as much as possible. For example
, buying
some Change preposition
by buying
goods
online while
having lunch at work, we can save a minimum of one or two hours and spend this
time
walking with friends or children. In contrast
, if we decide to go to traditional stores
, we just waste our free time
because of traffic jam
, Fix the agreement mistake
jams
queues
in Correct word choice
and queues
stores
. Also
we can buy some extra Add a comma
,Also
food
because of hunger after work. The second reason
for shopping online is the possibility of buying a lot
of different foreign goods
. We don’t
need to fly to other countries if we want medicine or cosmetics from Israel, bags or shoes from Italy and unusual food
from China. We just need to download an app and have a bank account. Such
an opportunity will allow people
to buy any necessary goods
, make an interesting gift, buy tickets for any concert, go on a trip or just buy food
for a romantic dinner.
Nevertheless
many Add a comma
,Nevertheless
people
prefer traditional shopping. The first reason
is the desire to see the product live, touch it and make your own choice. Even though delivery apps are responsible for the quality of the product, sometimes you don't get what you expected, because
of that, Correct word choice
and because
people
just don’t
trust online shopping. In my opinion, the second reason
is just a habit. Many people
like to go shopping, look for something new, try on clothes and think about every detail. Moreover
, for many people
it is a kind of therapy and relaxation.
In conclusion, buying Add a comma
,people
goods
online really provides many ways and solutions from the most mundane to the most unusual issues, it also
gives the
opportunity to save Correct pronoun usage
us the
time
, which is very valuable and necessary for us. But there are also
advantages to buying goods
in traditional stores
. We can always choose one or another option that suits us better, try to change our habits or stick to our principles.Submitted by nikolettliny on
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