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Some are convinced that all schools should be public and free of charge because all kids should have the same opportunities. there is an opinion that private schools provide better education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#schools #charge #kids #opportunities #education
As we embrace
education
 as an essential part of our life, Some
people
 believe that all educational institutions should provide the same opportunities and free
education
 for
children
; The rest of them have a verdict of choosing private schools for better curriculums. I completely agree with the former, rather than the latter view because private schooling will result in more mental pressure on the parents.
whereas
 getting free
education
 is
one
 of the fundamental rights of every child. On the
one
 hand, every academic institution has a greater responsibility for providing the best
education
. Nowadays
high
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 standard of
education
 comes with high fees eventually, which has
direct
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 impact on parents. Eye-catching advertisement of private institutions attracts
people
 to put admissions for their kids which
latter
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 results in a financial crisis.
For instance
, Some institutions do not consider low-wage or uneducated parent's
profile
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 for admitting their little
one
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 which has
direct
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 impact on
children
's future and emotionally affects parent's
mind
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.
On the other hand
, To get proper
education
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free of cost is a fundamental need for every child as no
one
 can deny
this
. Irrespective of status or other reasons,
lower income
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people
 can send their
children
 to study when
education
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 system becomes unconfined.
for example
, In
recent
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 survey, it is noted that Government schools are providing
best
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 results in academic
performances
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 with
large
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 number of students rather than
the
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apply
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private ones because of the opportunity of getting free
education
. In conclusion,
although
 private organisations provide a better environment and infrastructure to attract
people
, it has some drawbacks
on
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 affecting the mental health of parents, I believe in providing better opportunities free of cost
to
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study will result in fulfilling
children
's needs in the future.
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